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My Path
Aug 4, 2004 14:02:16 GMT -5
Post by TribalSpirit on Aug 4, 2004 14:02:16 GMT -5
Oh, for want of a blue moon, for silvery magick amongst the flood of a monsoon, For the chance to know my destiny, To finally know the ways She has blessed me, To bathe in the golden honey of a summer day, To join in the love of early May, To hear the call of the Lord's horn, To live true the oaths I have sworn, To understand the full journey of the Fool, To finally weild the Magician's tool, But as I sit and ponder these things, I realize what each season brings, First, love of a Mother returned by her Son, He grows and learns, but the growings not done, For when fiery Beltane fires burn, The love of marriage and union They earn, But when the light of the Lord runs out, I still do not mourn, nor do I pout, For the love of the Old comes forth from my heart, Therefore I may not know where my path ends but I know it'll always lead to a start, For my path's bound by the cycles of earth, The Fool's trek is never over, for every life becomes death, and death is just a birth.
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My Path
Aug 4, 2004 15:26:13 GMT -5
Post by Wicca Chick on Aug 4, 2004 15:26:13 GMT -5
Ohmygoddess! Lunar that is VERY good!!!!
When did you write this? Wow - where do you get all this stuff? Gosh - how do you get everyting to rhyme LOL - thats my biggest problem!
Its very nice - thanks for sharing!
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My Path
Aug 4, 2004 16:21:28 GMT -5
Post by TribalSpirit on Aug 4, 2004 16:21:28 GMT -5
aww thanks so much Wicca Chick!!!! I wrote it last night... Idk I was just off on a trail of thought and decided to put it down on paper! lol thank you SOOO much I really appreciate it!!!
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My Path
Aug 5, 2004 14:55:22 GMT -5
Post by Vampyrequeen99 on Aug 5, 2004 14:55:22 GMT -5
that is a really good poem i normally have a hard time rhymeing do you have a tips on rhyming lolz *teehee*
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My Path
Aug 5, 2004 14:59:09 GMT -5
Post by Wicca Chick on Aug 5, 2004 14:59:09 GMT -5
LOL haha I HAVE ONE!!!!
Visit those rhyming dictionaries online!!!
LOL
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My Path
Aug 5, 2004 15:10:05 GMT -5
Post by Vampyrequeen99 on Aug 5, 2004 15:10:05 GMT -5
lolz i do i give them the word cabbage and they give me hag i dont think that's rite lolz
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My Path
Aug 5, 2004 19:59:23 GMT -5
Post by TribalSpirit on Aug 5, 2004 19:59:23 GMT -5
lol yea I've used those online things once or twice!! they are helpful. But that one i wrote on pen and paper and when you can't think of a word that ryhems with "blessed of the Goddess" or whatever then just reword the first sentence!! "For by the Goddess they were blessed." or something else like that. Idk lol it just kinda flows out of ya!!!
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My Path
Aug 6, 2004 16:10:59 GMT -5
Post by TribalSpirit on Aug 6, 2004 16:10:59 GMT -5
wait does my title even make sense? lol leaded? is that right english??? hmm *confused* o well loll. soudns funny but i can change it..
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My Path
Aug 6, 2004 21:32:30 GMT -5
Post by Wicca Chick on Aug 6, 2004 21:32:30 GMT -5
lol thats a very good question lunar...i was thinking the title sounded a little funny - but i thought, oh maybe its just me and didnt give it a second thought... but now that you mention it, it does sound a little strange.... yeah i was thinking there is a problem with leaded too! lol im not exactly sure its the 'right english' lol. but its not like terrible, if it was so bad when i first read it i wouldve made some comment about the 'terrible title' you know what i mean...
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My Path
Aug 7, 2004 21:10:42 GMT -5
Post by TribalSpirit on Aug 7, 2004 21:10:42 GMT -5
haha yea... lol i used wrong english in a poem once i read in poetry class... the teacher got so irritated!!! lol. hehe it was kinda funny... lol but why do i always do it in the title?? haha the big bold print that you see first!! lol gosh ppl must think i'm a horrible poet!!! lol
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My Path
Aug 7, 2004 22:54:10 GMT -5
Post by Wicca Chick on Aug 7, 2004 22:54:10 GMT -5
lol nooo nobody thinks that lunar!!! your an amazing poet! And its the content that counts, not the title!! (well the title does count, but for very little compared to the content!) just double check your titles a few times next time
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My Path
Aug 8, 2004 12:06:12 GMT -5
Post by TribalSpirit on Aug 8, 2004 12:06:12 GMT -5
hehe okay. what should i change the title too?? my path... where my path leads.... ?? any suggestions... and could i change it on here so i dnt look dumb? hahaha.
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My Path
Aug 8, 2004 15:12:40 GMT -5
Post by Wicca Chick on Aug 8, 2004 15:12:40 GMT -5
Hmm the ones that you suggested for your own poem were good: - My Path Where My Path Leads? - I think those are both in 'correct english' lol (although I personally like one more than another, I wont tell you which one lol - its your poem, you have to decide which one is more meaningful and suitable for it! )
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Aug 8, 2004 20:51:40 GMT -5
Post by TribalSpirit on Aug 8, 2004 20:51:40 GMT -5
I think I'm going to go with where my path leads. coudl you change the title on this thread??? jsut wondering lol.
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Aug 8, 2004 21:34:02 GMT -5
Post by Wicca Chick on Aug 8, 2004 21:34:02 GMT -5
yeah you can, you edit any post youve posted yourself.
On the top right hand corner of each post - there are the buttons quote and modify right? you see them? just click on modify.
lol its as simple as that, a lot easier than just reposting everything when you make a mistake of clicking enter by accident!
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