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Post by TribalSpirit on May 24, 2004 16:31:41 GMT -5
She’s Listening
There I was lying, asleep in my bed, Sweet slumber of dreaming, silver-clouds inside my head, She whispered to me, calling from near yet afar, Her Moon-crescent brow, her eyes made of stars,
Her silk gown of moonlight, her touch of cool warmth, She whispered and called, beckoning me forth, She’d heard my prayers, and leading me by the hand, Glided over deep blue oceans, sleeping in her sands,
Danced with the rain, cuddled with the rainbow, Showing me the inner wisdom, Nature’s sure to know, Walked among the water lilies, flew with the Eastern breeze, Sang with the chanting of fire, lay amongst the white-rose trees,
She held me through the night; she walked with me through the day, She led me to the mountaintop, and she began to fade away, A final kiss upon my brow, and said all I ever need do is pray.
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Faery
Junior Member
No we can't afford to save our environment.... How ever we can afford to destroy it :(
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Post by Faery on May 25, 2004 3:11:34 GMT -5
You got good talet Lunar. ;D
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Mesonnia
Junior Member
The light of the universe illuminates the Path for All.
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Post by Mesonnia on May 26, 2004 11:53:03 GMT -5
Amazing talent Luna, I wish I could write so well, it is so beautiful
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Post by TribalSpirit on May 28, 2004 15:13:37 GMT -5
aww thanks guys you're all sweethearts! hehe.
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Post by Syri Whiteflame on Jun 2, 2004 20:50:39 GMT -5
*standing ovation* beautiful again i want to add your work to my bos. just watch i'll end up filling like 1/4 with your writings lol
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Liam
Newbie
Brightest of Blessings to our Lord and Lady, may They be with us in all that we do...
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Post by Liam on Jun 10, 2004 10:36:45 GMT -5
wow -claps furiously- Lunar, you have that talent of caputuring a persons deepest most undesribable emotions and putting them to words
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SlayerDrow
Junior Member
I am vindicated. I am selfish. I am wrong, and I am right. I swear I'm right.
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Post by SlayerDrow on Aug 26, 2004 10:59:36 GMT -5
Okay, just a little late lol...Omg, that was so beautiful! I can't even describe what I felt when I read it, nice job!
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Post by TribalSpirit on Aug 26, 2004 11:26:16 GMT -5
once again, thank you!!! lol. you couldn't find the Beltane poem of mine, huh? lol that's WAY hidden i bet.......
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