Liam
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Brightest of Blessings to our Lord and Lady, may They be with us in all that we do...
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Post by Liam on Jun 18, 2004 9:10:44 GMT -5
My Dying Breath
if i had to die tommorow, i would die in your arms.
using my last gasping breaths to tell you how much i love you.
to thank you for all you've done. and how wonderful you've been to me.
for giving me strenght, when i could not find it within myself.
for picking me up when i fall. your ever ready hand should i stumble again.
for giving me hope, in my darkest hour of shadow.
for your shoulder, if ever my burden too heavy to carry alone.
if i had to die tommorow, it would be in my Lady's arms.
with my last dying breath, my love for you would be heard by all the world.
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WiccanSage
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Fear not death, for in it you will finded true peace
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Post by WiccanSage on Jun 20, 2004 5:55:55 GMT -5
MM,
Very nice poem
*Blessed Be* WiccanSage
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Post by Syri Whiteflame on Jun 20, 2004 16:00:40 GMT -5
such a beautiful sentiment, and i really like some of those word arrangements and word usage ^-^
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Post by Wicca Chick on Jun 20, 2004 21:41:18 GMT -5
I love the poem...seroiusly, its soo meaningful! Its relaly good... ;D you mustve relaly put thought and you feelings truly in it. Its obvious. Very beautiful!
Thank you for sharing...
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