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Life
Jul 2, 2004 9:13:03 GMT -5
Post by DarkRain on Jul 2, 2004 9:13:03 GMT -5
Kneel down Look around the clock is ticking and it is passing you by
Sit Think Do you know where your destination is? on this road of life
Stand up Take a step You dont want to linger for your path is taking a new turn
And your journey is far from over
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Life
Jul 15, 2004 3:03:03 GMT -5
Post by Syri Whiteflame on Jul 15, 2004 3:03:03 GMT -5
thought provokaing and i love the wording; more proof that poetry does not have to rhyme i have those same thoughts though, just sitting on the coach, it's like umm am i wasting life sitting here ... shouldn't i like ... get up and ... um do something lol keeps you alert though, always thinking about the future and living life so that when you die it won't have all been just one long string of regrets and could-have-beens.
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Life
Jul 28, 2004 17:34:44 GMT -5
Post by TribalSpirit on Jul 28, 2004 17:34:44 GMT -5
lol I missed this poem somehow lol. CONGRATS!! more amazing work DR!! I like it to... lol i feel like a bum alot so yea hehe.
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