|
Post by DarkRain on Jul 27, 2004 4:44:47 GMT -5
The contenders enter misty rooms of old
two beacons emerge beacons of light one red the other blue the contenders move to the center dust flying in their wake alive with battle
blue steps right his nemesis does the same embroiled in a deadly dance only one can survive
finally the moment of truth his nemesis is defeated lying on the ground his weapon lies out of reach cleft in half
the moment of truth the blue blade hums in his hand ready for the final blow
then it goes dead
a sudden rumble from over head pebbles fall to the ground
chunks of rock fall from above pummeling the adversary
red tries to escape the hail he nears the crevasse in an attempt to flee he stands
another thunderous sound from above another massive chunk of debris the adversary moves to avoid he looses his footing he screams to the other but his pleas fall upon delft ears
he slides over the edge wailing in dismay
as the winner moves from the ruins to meet his transport he thinks to himself none shall know what transpired here none shall have the chance to report the event he shall see to it... personally
(inspired by my signature picture)
|
|
|
Post by TribalSpirit on Jul 27, 2004 12:39:38 GMT -5
Wow I really liked that... it was like a story but more intererestig! lol if that makes sense! Go Dark Rain!!! VEry interesting signature it does fit together... where'd you get it from?
|
|
|
Post by Wicca Chick on Jul 27, 2004 13:39:16 GMT -5
i agree with Lunar! It is a lot like a story...but in a poem, which makes it wayyy more descriptive! ;D Awesome stuff! Thanks for sharing! And welcome back! Where have you been? on another vacation? Edited to say: Love the name of the poem- Dance of fate
|
|
|
Post by DarkRain on Jul 27, 2004 20:08:37 GMT -5
i've been outa my house alot...hangin with friends and all... but yeah i love the pic.. i got it from the Star Wars RPG websits' art gallery section...its from the Dark Side Source book ... but i edited it from the original by adding the word art of my sn and fading it around the outside to black... but i wrote this cuzi've been in a big Star Wars tangent recently...
also part of y i havent been on lately... been playing Star Wars Galaxies a massivly multyplayer online game... lol...been usin my friends account...he dusnt use it...and he wanted me to get a tast of the gamplay b4 i buy it myself...
|
|
|
Post by Wicca Chick on Jul 27, 2004 21:08:00 GMT -5
Ohh thats awesome...Thanks for sharing!! ;D lol glad to hear that youve been busy and making good use of your time!!! lol thats more than i can say for myself...ive been doing pretty much nothing (well nothing productive that is. just the usual stuff - computer, tv, shopping, movies, etc) But I'll be more busy in August...OK and I will really stop rambling on right now!
Well where do you get all the time to write all these poems?!
Anyways,
Well glad to have you back DR!!!
|
|