XFuLLm00nx
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Post by XFuLLm00nx on Jul 28, 2004 12:49:12 GMT -5
This poem is really graphic so I'm just warning those who might not want to read it..
A Beautiful Death
I grasp the knife within my hand And take it to my room I rest the blade ypon my neck As I await my doom It gently slides across my throat Before making any marks And makes its way down to my wrist As I sit here in the dark The candles light before me From an unknown source I slit my wrist while thinking Of how death will take its course I am speeding up the process Ridding the world of a mistake A final kiss upon the blade A worthless life it will soon take My blood falls silently to the floor Like a shower of crimson rain I slice into my flesh again And I enjoy the pain The blood and teardrops glisten In the flickering candlelight A puddle below like a melted rose O what a beautiful sight I write a farewell letter Signing it in blood It's pouring from me greatly now The cuts begin to flood The end is near I cannot wait Soon enough I will be gone My heartbeat slow as I die Like an ending song I take the blade and slice again Some more blood now appears With it drains my sadness And all my pain and fears I hear the clock ticking nearby With each second I become more weak I wish to let more blood pour out For death is what I seek I am now ready to leave this world I slowly raise the knife Maybe after I depart The gods will give me a better life It's finally over I thinkto myself I will not suffer anymore I push the blade far into my neck And one last time the blood starts to pour
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Post by TribalSpirit on Jul 28, 2004 15:40:15 GMT -5
Wow two thoughts on that ... and It's reallly sad ::obviously:: but the way you say thing's is so wonderful like a melted rose and crimson rain.. I really love that imagry!!!
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XFuLLm00nx
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Post by XFuLLm00nx on Jul 28, 2004 16:30:56 GMT -5
Yeah I know its really sad...I was going through a really rough time when I wrote that. But it's one of my favorites..I also like the imagery in that one..not to brag lolz.
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Post by TribalSpirit on Jul 28, 2004 17:31:10 GMT -5
'final kiss upon the blade' i like that too.
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XFuLLm00nx
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Post by XFuLLm00nx on Jul 29, 2004 12:00:22 GMT -5
Lolz thanks...there also two more that I posted that you didn't comment on..have you read those yet?
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Post by TribalSpirit on Jul 29, 2004 13:02:03 GMT -5
yea... just ddnt wanna be a poet stakler like a mentioned before!! lol.
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XFuLLm00nx
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Post by XFuLLm00nx on Jul 29, 2004 23:56:30 GMT -5
lolz okay but once again i dont think ur a poet stalker! ur just bein nice! hehe.
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Post by skatedude976 on Jul 29, 2004 23:57:20 GMT -5
i like this poem, graphic, but i like it, and im glad u wrote this instead of actually doin it
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XFuLLm00nx
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Post by XFuLLm00nx on Jul 29, 2004 23:58:43 GMT -5
Yeah...I thought of doing it many times..and actually tried once..but I was pretty messed up then..I'm getting better now! I think mostly I can thank Wicca for that!
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Post by skatedude976 on Jul 30, 2004 0:02:01 GMT -5
im glad ur better, i hope u stay better to, i love you amy!! and dont think about comitting suicide again!!
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XFuLLm00nx
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Post by XFuLLm00nx on Jul 30, 2004 7:34:08 GMT -5
aww I love you too. And I havn't thought of doing it in a while. I wouldn't actually ever do it I don't think...life is too good to give up. I just need to work through the bad things. And besides if I killed myself I'd haff to leave you behind and I would never want to do that! I love you too much!!
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Post by SlayerDrow on Aug 23, 2004 12:05:03 GMT -5
Did I already reply to this...if I did I can't find my post lol...so I'll just post now...okay...:P
AMAZING word choices! Everything flows so nicely!!! You are really talented!
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XFuLLm00nx
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Post by XFuLLm00nx on Aug 23, 2004 21:37:21 GMT -5
Thankyou!! I think this is my favorite outta all my poems. I'm glad you liked it!
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Post by TribalSpirit on Aug 26, 2004 0:10:40 GMT -5
yea i think its' my favorite too!! only it makes me sad! lol
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Post by zephyrali on Oct 5, 2006 21:39:10 GMT -5
Very graphic, but I like how the words flow together. I am glad your getting better. Your very talented
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